The first thing she noticed was the silence.
Not the peaceful kind.
The kind that presses against your ears until your own breathing feels too loud.
“M… Dad…”
Her voice cracked as it echoed off the concrete walls.
The room was barely bigger than a closet. No windows. No clock. Just a single weak bulb hanging from the ceiling, flickering like it might give up at any second. Dust floated in the air, glowing briefly whenever the light steadied, then disappearing again into darkness.
Ten-year-old Emily Carter sat on the cold floor, her back pressed against the wall, knees pulled tight to her chest. Her hair was tangled, her cheeks streaked with dried tears. She had stopped crying loudly hours ago—maybe days. She didn’t know. Time didn’t exist in a room like this.
Her throat burned.
“Dad, please…” she whispered again. “Please save me.”
The door didn’t open.
Emily squeezed her eyes shut, forcing herself not to scream. Screaming only made things worse. Screaming reminded her that Emily still had hope.
And hope was something her mother hated.
It hadn’t always been like this.
Just weeks ago, Emily had lived in a bright house with white walls and blue curtains. Her dad, Mark Carter, used to wake her every morning with pancakes shaped like stars. He’d smile even when he was tired, even when his phone wouldn’t stop buzzing with work calls.
“Just a few more months,” he used to say. “Then everything will be better.”
Emily didn’t understand what that meant. She didn’t need to. As long as her dad was there, the world felt safe.
But then he left.
“Business trip,” her mom said.
That was the day everything changed.
The bulb flickered again.
Emily flinched, hugging herself tighter as footsteps echoed from the other side of the door.
Slow. Confident. Familiar.
The lock clicked.
The door creaked open just enough for light from the hallway to spill inside, blinding Emily for a moment.
Her mother stepped in.
Rachel Carter looked nothing like a woman who had a child locked in a storeroom.
Her hair was perfectly styled. Her makeup flawless. She wore a cream-colored dress that looked expensive—too expensive for someone who claimed they were “struggling” ever since Mark left.
She didn’t look at Emily at first.
Instead, she held a plate in her hand.
Rachel lowered it to the floor and pushed it forward with her foot, like she was shoving trash aside.
The food was cold. Gray. A lump of something that might have once been mashed potatoes, alongside a piece of bread so hard it looked like it could break a tooth.
Emily stared at it, her stomach twisting.
“Mom…” she whispered. “I’m hungry. But… this—”
Rachel finally looked at her.
And smiled.
It wasn’t a warm smile. It was sharp. Controlled.
“Eat,” Rachel said flatly. “Or die. I don’t care.”
Emily’s eyes filled with tears again.
“Please,” she cried. “Please call Dad. I’ll be good. I promise. I won’t ask for anything. I just want Dad.”
Rachel’s face hardened instantly.
“You don’t get to say his name,” she snapped.
Emily flinched like she’d been slapped.
Rachel leaned down, close enough that Emily could smell her perfume—sweet and expensive, completely wrong in a room that smelled like dust and damp concrete.
“Your father abandoned us,” Rachel whispered. “He chose his money over you.”
“That’s not true!” Emily sobbed. “He promised he’d come back!”
Rachel straightened, smoothing her dress like the conversation bored her.
“Finish your food,” she said coldly. “I’ll be back later. Maybe.”
The door slammed shut.
The lock clicked again.
Emily screamed then.
She couldn’t help it.
She didn’t touch the food.
Hours passed. Or maybe minutes. She didn’t know.
Her stomach growled painfully, but fear hurt more than hunger.
She dragged herself toward the corner of the room where a stack of old boxes sat. One of them had been torn open. Inside were broken tools, wires, and… something shiny.
Emily’s heart skipped.
A phone.
Old. Scratched. The screen cracked, but unmistakably a phone.
Her hands trembled as she picked it up.
No signal.
“No… no no no,” she whispered desperately, tapping the screen.
The battery icon flashed red.
One percent.
Emily pressed her back against the wall, shielding the phone with her body like it was something precious—because it was.
Her only chance.
She opened the dial pad with shaking fingers.
Her dad’s number was the only one she remembered.
She typed it in.
The phone buzzed weakly.
Then—nothing.
The screen went black.
Emily screamed again, louder this time.
She threw the phone against the wall, sobbing so hard her chest hurt.
“That was my chance,” she cried. “That was my only chance.”
She slid down to the floor, curling into herself as the darkness closed in.
Across town, Mark Carter stared at his phone.
He’d been calling Emily for days.
Straight to voicemail.
Something felt wrong. Deeply wrong.
Rachel never kept Emily from him before. Not like this.
Mark rubbed his face, exhaustion pulling at his eyes. His business deal had finally gone through—millions of dollars on the line. The kind of money that could change everything.
And now, all he could think about was his daughter’s voice the last time he heard it.
“Daddy, when are you coming home?”
“Soon,” he’d promised.
Too soon.
Back in the storeroom, Emily lay still, staring at the ceiling.
Her throat burned from crying. Her body felt weak.
The door opened again.
Rachel stood there, arms crossed, unimpressed.
“You didn’t eat,” she said.
Emily lifted her head slowly, hatred and fear mixing in her eyes.
“Why are you doing this?” Emily whispered. “What did I do wrong?”
Rachel tilted her head, studying her like a problem that refused to solve itself.
“You exist,” she said calmly.
Emily froze.
“That’s what you did wrong.”
Rachel turned to leave again—but paused.
“Oh,” she added casually. “Your dad isn’t coming. I made sure of that.”
The door shut.
The lock clicked.
Emily’s heart sank into something cold and heavy.
But deep inside her, beneath the fear and hunger, something else stirred.
Determination.
Because somewhere out there, her dad was still alive.
And she refused to believe this room was where her story ended.
END OF PART 1
👉 Part 2 will reveal what Rachel is hiding… and the one mistake she never expected to make.
Part 2: Trapped in a Dark Room by Her Own Mother — The Ending Will Break You
